Creating a Character: Internal Monologue

One comment frequently made in writing workshops is along the lines of "I like the action, but I want to know what the character is thinking."  This is often a tough area for writers, because our internal monologue is constantly running.  What do we show?  What do we filter out?  Should a characters thought be limited to one sentence or should it be a sprawling Shakespearian monologue?  Should the internal monologue read in the same way the character talks, or should it read differently?

While all these questions depend on many factors such as your personal writing style, the subject matter of your story, and the themes, ideas, actions, etc. that you are trying to get across; it is always best to have the ability to implement any style of thought when you might think your story calls for it.

Creative Writing Prompt: Today, we are going to focus on creating a characters internal monologue because it is often considered the most difficult to pull off.  Write a scene which takes place almost entirely from your characters mind.  Try to pull off stream of conciseness, where every thought in your characters mind is written.  If you need some guidance, have your character get on a public bus and record his or her thoughts as he walks to the back looking for a spot.

Recommended reading:

• The Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad - This classic story is a great study for the topic of the internal monologue, especially towards the end.  This book is required reading for any writer.